RFC Errata
RFC 4322, "Opportunistic Encryption using the Internet Key Exchange (IKE)", December 2005
Source of RFC: IETF - NON WORKING GROUPArea Assignment: sec
See Also: RFC 4322 w/ inline errata
Errata ID: 2455
Status: Verified
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2006-03-20
Verifier Name: Sean Turner
Date Verified: 2010-08-06
Section 9.3 says:
The first senrtence of Section 9.3, on page 34, says: Tunnels sometimes go down because the remote end crashes, disconnects, or has a network link break. [...] The 'line break' might occor at any place within the network, not just at the 'remote end'. Therefore, the text should better say: Tunnels sometimes go down because the remote end crashes, | disconnects, or a network link break occurs. [...]
Notes:
To facilitate the recognition of the text changes proposed,
I have added change bars ('|') in column 1, and up/down pointing
marker lines ('^^^'/'vvv').