RFC Errata
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Status: Verified (1)
RFC 8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery", October 2018
Source of RFC: l2sm (ops)
Errata ID: 5615
Status: Verified
Type: Technical
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Nikolai Malykh
Date Reported: 2019-01-28
Verifier Name: Ignas Bagdonas
Date Verified: 2019-07-09
Section 5.10.1 says:
The svc-bandwidth parameter must include a "cos-id" parameter if the "type" is set to "bw-per-cos". The cos-id can be assigned based on either (1) the IEEE 802.1p value [IEEE-802-1D] in the C-tag or (2) the Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP) in the Ethernet frame header. Service frames are metered against the bandwidth profile based on the cos-id.
It should say:
The svc-bandwidth parameter must include a "cos-id" parameter if the "type" is set to "bw-per-cos". The cos-id can be assigned based on either (1) the IEEE 802.1p value [IEEE-802-1D] in the C-tag or (2) the Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP) in the IP header. Service frames are metered against the bandwidth profile based on the cos-id.
Notes:
The DSCP field is part of the IP packet header, not the Ethernet frame руфвук.
Status: Reported (8)
RFC 8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery", October 2018
Source of RFC: l2sm (ops)
Errata ID: 5922
Status: Reported
Type: Technical
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alexander ("Sasha") Vainshtein
Date Reported: 2019-11-27
Section 8 says:
identity bgp-vpls {
base service-type;
description
"BGP-based multipoint VPLS service type. This VPLS uses a
BGP control plane as described in RFCs 4761 and 6624.";
}
identity vpws-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
as specified in RFC 7432.";
}
It should say:
identity bgp-vpls {
base service-type;
description
"BGP-based multipoint VPLS service type. This VPLS uses a
BGP control plane as described in RFCs 4761 and 6624.";
}
identity evpn {
base service-type;
description
" EVPN service type as specified in RFC 7432"
}
identity vpws-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
as specified in RFC 7432.";
}
Notes:
The service type for an EVPN service as defined in RFC 7432 is missing.
Errata ID: 6383
Status: Reported
Type: Technical
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Julian Lucek
Date Reported: 2021-01-08
Section 8 says:
container service {
container svc-bandwidth {
if-feature "input-bw";
list bandwidth {
key "direction type";
leaf direction {
type identityref {
base bw-direction;
}
description
"Indicates the bandwidth direction. It can be
the bandwidth download direction from the SP to
the site or the bandwidth upload direction from
the site to the SP.";
}
Notes:
The svc-bandwidth container is triggered by if-feature "input-bw". However, that container can contain input-bw only, output-bw only or both. It might be better to have two separate containers, one for input-bw and the other for output-bw, triggered by if-feature "input-bw" and if-feature "output-bw" respectively.
Errata ID: 6699
Status: Reported
Type: Technical
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Mohamed Boucadair
Date Reported: 2021-10-01
Section 8 says:
container lacp {
if-feature "lacp";
leaf enabled {
type boolean;
default "false";
description
"LACP on/off. By default, LACP is disabled.";
}
leaf mode {
type neg-mode;
description
"LACP mode. LACP modes have active mode and
passive mode ('false'). 'Active mode' means
initiating the auto-speed negotiation and
trying to form an Ethernet channel with the
other end. 'Passive mode' means not initiating
the negotiation but responding to LACP packets
initiated by the other end (e.g., full duplex
or half duplex).";
}
It should say:
container lacp {
if-feature "lacp";
leaf enabled {
type boolean;
default "false";
description
"LACP on/off. By default, LACP is disabled.";
}
leaf mode {
type identityref {
base lacp-mode;
}
description
"LACP mode. LACP modes have active mode and
passive mode ('false'). 'Active mode' means
initiating the auto-speed negotiation and
trying to form an Ethernet channel with the
other end. 'Passive mode' means not initiating
the negotiation but responding to LACP packets
initiated by the other end (e.g., full duplex
or half duplex).";
}
Also, make this change:
OLD:
| +--rw lag-interfaces {lag-interface}?
| | +--rw lag-interface* [index]
| | +--rw index string
| | +--rw lacp {lacp}?
| | +--rw enabled? boolean
| | +--rw mode? neg-mode
NEW:
| +--rw lag-interfaces {lag-interface}?
| | +--rw lag-interface* [index]
| | +--rw index string
| | +--rw lacp {lacp}?
| | +--rw enabled? boolean
| | +--rw mode? identityref
Notes:
The LACP mode can be set to active or passive, which is not what neg-mode is supposed to cover. lacp-mode identity should be used, instead.
Errata ID: 6922
Status: Reported
Type: Technical
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Mohamed Boucadair
Date Reported: 2022-04-05
Section 5.5.2.1 says:
<svc-bandwidth>
<bandwidth>
<direction>input-bw</direction>
<type>bw-per-cos</type>
<cir>450000000</cir>
<cbs>20000000</cbs>
<eir>1000000000</eir>
<ebs>200000000</ebs>
</bandwidth>
</svc-bandwidth>
It should say:
<svc-bandwidth>
<bandwidth>
<direction>input-bw</direction>
<type>bw-per-cos</type>
<cos-id>10</cos-id>
<cir>450000000</cir>
<cbs>20000000</cbs>
<eir>1000000000</eir>
<ebs>200000000</ebs>
</bandwidth>
</svc-bandwidth>
Notes:
* Note 1: cos-id must be included as per the following:
leaf cos-id {
when "derived-from-or-self(../type, "
+ "'l2vpn-svc:bw-per-cos')" {
description
"Relevant when the bandwidth type is set to
'bw-per-cos'.";
}
type uint8;
description
"Identifier of the CoS, indicated by DSCP or a
CE-VLAN CoS (802.1p) value in the service frame.
If the bandwidth type is set to 'bw-per-cos',
the CoS ID MUST also be specified.";
}
* Note 2: More changes are needed because the current structure does not allow to specify multiple cos-ids.
Errata ID: 5921
Status: Reported
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alexander ("Sasha") Vainshtein
Date Reported: 2019-11-27
Section 8 says:
identity vpws-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
as specified in RFC 7432.";
identity pbb-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"Provider Backbone Bridge (PBB) service type using
EVPNs as specified in RFC 7432.";
}
It should say:
identity vpws-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
as specified in RFC 8214.";
identity pbb-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"Provider Backbone Bridge (PBB) service type using
EVPNs as specified in RFC 7623.";
}
Notes:
Neither VPWS-EVPN nor PBB-EVPN are mentioned in RFC 7432.
The former is defined in RFC 8214, and the latter - in RFC 7623.
Please note also that RFC 7623 is not mentioned as one of the references.
Errata ID: 6384
Status: Reported
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Julian Lucek
Date Reported: 2021-01-08
Section 8 says:
identity pbb-evpn {
base service-type;
description
"Provider Backbone Bridge (PBB) service type using
EVPNs as specified in RFC 7432.";
}
It should say:
identity evpn {
base service-type;
description
"EVPN service type as specified in RFC 7432.";
}
Notes:
The mention of PBB is a mistake, it should be normal (non-PBB) EVPN, given that Section 3.1 lists EVPN and not PBB-EVPN among the supported L2VPN types. However, the reference to RFC 7432 in the original text box above is correct, as that RFC deals with EVPN, not PBB-EVPN.
(n.b. see erratum 5921 that has the "opposite" interpretation, i.e. that pbb-evpn is correct but that the RFC number is wrong)
Errata ID: 6555
Status: Reported
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Mohamed Boucadair
Date Reported: 2021-04-23
Section 8 says:
container vxlan {
when "derived-from-or-self(../type, "
+ "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" {
description
"Only applies when the type of the tagged
interface is 'vxlan'.";
}
if-feature "vxlan";
leaf vni-id {
type uint32;
mandatory true;
description
"VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI).";
}
leaf peer-mode {
type identityref {
base vxlan-peer-mode;
}
default "static-mode";
description
"Specifies the VXLAN access mode. By default,
the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'.";
}
list peer-list {
key "peer-ip";
leaf peer-ip {
type inet:ip-address;
description
"Peer IP.";
}
description
"List of peer IP addresses.";
}
description
"QinQ.";
}
It should say:
container vxlan {
when "derived-from-or-self(../type, "
+ "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" {
description
"Only applies when the type of the tagged
interface is 'vxlan'.";
}
if-feature "vxlan";
leaf vni-id {
type uint32;
mandatory true;
description
"VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI).";
}
leaf peer-mode {
type identityref {
base vxlan-peer-mode;
}
default "static-mode";
description
"Specifies the VXLAN access mode. By default,
the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'.";
}
list peer-list {
key "peer-ip";
leaf peer-ip {
type inet:ip-address;
description
"Peer IP.";
}
description
"List of peer IP addresses.";
}
description
"Container for VXLAN.";
}
Notes:
The description should refer to VXLAN not QinQ.
Errata ID: 6683
Status: Reported
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Mohamed Boucadair
Date Reported: 2021-09-14
Section 5.10.2.1 says:
QoS classification rules are handled by "qos-classification-policy". qos-classification-policy is an ordered list of rules that match a flow or application and set the appropriate target CoS (target-class-id). The user can define the match using a more specific flow definition (based on Layer 2 source and destination MAC addresses, cos, dscp, cos-id, color-id, etc.). A "color-id" will be assigned to a service frame to identify its QoS profile conformance. A service frame is "green" if it is conformant with the "committed" rate of the bandwidth profile. A service frame is "yellow" if it exceeds the "committed" rate but is conformant with the "excess" rate of the bandwidth profile. Finally, a service frame is "red" if it is conformant with neither the "committed" rate nor the "excess" rate of the bandwidth profile.
It should say:
QoS classification rules are handled by "qos-classification-policy". qos-classification-policy is an ordered list of rules that match a flow or application and set the appropriate target CoS (target-class-id). The user can define the match using a more specific flow definition (based on Layer 2 source and destination MAC addresses, dscp, color-type, etc.). A "color-type" will be assigned to a service frame to identify its QoS profile conformance. A service frame is "green" if it is conformant with the "committed" rate of the bandwidth profile. A service frame is "yellow" if it exceeds the "committed" rate but is conformant with the "excess" rate of the bandwidth profile. Finally, a service frame is "red" if it is conformant with neither the "committed" rate nor the "excess" rate of the bandwidth profile.
Notes:
There is no "color-id" under "qos-classification-policy". The text should refer to "color-type" given that the "qos-classification-policy" substree is as follows:
+--rw service
| +--rw qos {qos}?
| | +--rw qos-classification-policy
| | | +--rw rule* [id]
| | | +--rw id string
| | | +--rw (match-type)?
| | | | +--:(match-flow)
| | | | | +--rw match-flow
| | | | | +--rw dscp? inet:dscp
| | | | | +--rw dot1q? uint16
| | | | | +--rw pcp? uint8
| | | | | +--rw src-mac? yang:mac-address
| | | | | +--rw dst-mac? yang:mac-address
| | | | | +--rw color-type? identityref
| | | | | +--rw target-sites*
| | | | | | svc-id {target-sites}?
| | | | | +--rw any? empty
| | | | | +--rw vpn-id? svc-id
| | | | +--:(match-application)
| | | | +--rw match-application? identityref
| | | +--rw target-class-id? string
The same applies for "cos" and "cos-id".
The corrected text uses "color-type" instead of "color-id" and removes "cos" and "cos-id" from the flow definition examples.
Status: Held for Document Update (1)
RFC 8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery", October 2018
Source of RFC: l2sm (ops)
Errata ID: 6703
Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Mohamed Boucadair
Date Reported: 2021-10-05
Held for Document Update by: Rob Wilton
Date Held: 2022-05-19
Section 8 says:
leaf pbs {
type uint64;
units "bps";
description
"Peak Burst Size. It is measured in bytes per
second.";
}
It should say:
leaf pbs {
type uint64;
units "Bytes per Second";
description
"Peak Burst Size.";
}
Notes:
There is a mismatch between the units statement and the description text.
The corrected text assumes that the description reflects the intent. This is the meaning assumed in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm