RFC 3401, "Dynamic Delegation Discovery System (DDDS) Part One: The Comprehensive DDDS", October 2002

Errata ID: 2641
Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2010-11-22
Held for Document Update by: Peter Saint-Andre

Section 2, 2nd para says:

|  This document along with RFC 3402, RFC 3403 and RFC 3404 obsoletes
   RFC 2168 [8] and RFC 2915 [6], as well as updates RFC 2276 [5].  This
   document will be updated and or obsoleted when changes are made to
   the DDDS specifications.  Thus the reader is strongly encouraged to
|  check the IETF RFC repository for any documents that obsoletes or
|  updates this one.

It should say:

|  This document along with RFC 3402 [1], RFC 3403 [2], and RFC 3404 [3]
   obsoletes RFC 2168 [8] and RFC 2915 [6], as well as updates RFC 2276
   [5].  This document will be updated and or obsoleted when changes are
   made to the DDDS specifications.  Thus the reader is strongly
   encouraged to check the IETF RFC repository for any documents that
|  update or obsolete this one.

Notes:

Rationale:
a) missing citations,
b) grammar,
c) changed order according to expected temporal order and likelyhood
and thus, to match the preceding sentence.

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