RFC 4327, "Link Management Protocol (LMP) Management Information Base (MIB)", January 2006

Note: This RFC has been obsoleted by RFC 4631

Errata ID: 1938
Status: Rejected
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT
Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2006-02-24
Rejected by: Adrian Farrel
Date Rejected: 2009-10-30

(9)  lmpCcHelloInterval OBJECT-TYPE  (page 21)

An established 'default' specifies the value of a (newly created)
tabular object to be used when this object is not SET explicitely.
Hence,

   DESCRIPTION
       "This object specifies the value of the HelloInterval
        parameter.  The default value for this object should be
        set to lmpCcHelloIntervalDefault."
   ::= { lmpControlChannelEntry 10 }

should better say:

   DESCRIPTION
       "This object specifies the value of the HelloInterval
|       parameter.  The default value to be used for this object
|       is lmpCcHelloIntervalDefault."
   ::= { lmpControlChannelEntry 10 }


(9')   lmpCcHelloIntervalMin OBJECT-TYPE  (page 21) ,
(9'')  lmpCcHelloIntervalMax OBJECT-TYPE  (page 21/22) ,
(10)   lmpCcHelloDeadInterval OBJECT-TYPE  (page 22) ,
(10')  lmpCcHelloDeadIntervalMin OBJECT-TYPE  (page 22) , and
(10'') lmpCcHelloDeadIntervalMax OBJECT-TYPE  (page 22)

The change from item (9) above should be applied there similarly:

Replace the phrase,

           "[...].  The default value for this object should be
        set to lmp<*>Default."

by:

|          "[...].  The default value to be used for this object
|       is lmp<*>Default."

using, at all instances, the appropriate value for the placeholder <*>.


(13)  lmpTeLinkEntry OBJECT-TYPE  (page 36)

The DESCRIPTION clause contains the sentence:

                                                      [...].  The
        administrative status value is controlled from the ifEntry.
        [...]

This sentence should say:

                                                      [...].  The
|       administrative status is controlled from the ifEntry.
        [...]


(19)  lmpDataLinkEntry OBJECT-TYPE  (page 51)

The correction from item (13) above is to be applied here as well:

The sentence in the DESCRIPTION clause,

                   [...].  The administrative status value is
        controlled from the ifEntry.  [...]

should say:

|                  [...].  The administrative value is
        controlled from the ifEntry.  [...]


(22)  lmpNodeGroup OBJECT-GROUP  (page 71/72)

Near the top of page 72, the RFC says:

   DESCRIPTION
          "Collection of objects that represent LMP node
           configuration."
   ::= { lmpGroups 1 }

It should say:

   DESCRIPTION
|         "Collection of objects that represents the LMP node
           configuration."
   ::= { lmpGroups 1 }

[ In fact, it is *the collection* (singular) that represents
  the node configuration! ]


(24)  lmpDataLinkGroup OBJECT-GROUP  (page 76)

Similar to item (22) above, the clause,

   DESCRIPTION
          "Collection of objects that represent data-bearing link
           configuration."
   ::= { lmpGroups 9 }

should better say:

   DESCRIPTION
          "Collection of objects that represents data-bearing link
           configurations."
   ::= { lmpGroups 9 }

It should say:

[see above]

Notes:

Verifier's analysis:

9. No. Editorial change of no substance.
9' No. Editorial change of no substance.
9" No. Editorial change of no substance.
10. No. Editorial change of no substance.
10' No. Editorial change of no substance.
10" No. Editorial change of no substance.
13. No. The value is controlled, not the status.
19. No. The value is controlled, not the status.
22. No. The English is correct.
24. No. The English is correct.

Verified items are in Errata ID 705.

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