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RFC 4295, "Mobile IPv6 Management Information Base", April 2006

Source of RFC: mip6 (int)

Errata ID: 137
Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial
Publication Format(s) : TEXT

Reported By: Alfred Hoenes
Date Reported: 2006-07-08
Held for Document Update by: Brian Haberman
Date Held: 2013-03-16

 

(7)  description too unspecific, and punctuation

The DESCRIPTION clause of the mip6HaCompliance2 MODULE-COMPLIANCE,
on page 95, says:

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB and
                   support monitoring of the home agent
|                  functionality specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics,
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]

for reasons as in item (5) and item (6) above,
it should better say:

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB and
|                  support detailed monitoring of the home agent
|                  functionality, specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics.
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]


(8)  punctuation, and extraneous blank line

The DESCRIPTION clause of the mip6HaCompliance3 MODULE-COMPLIANCE,
on page 96, says:

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB and
                   support monitoring and control of the home agent
|                  functionality specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics,
|
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]

It should say (see above items for rationale and similarity):

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB and
                   support monitoring and control of the home agent
|                  functionality, specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics.
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]


(9)  punctuation, and extraneous blank line

The DESCRIPTION clause of the mip6HaReadOnlyCompliance2
MODULE-COMPLIANCE, on page 99, says:

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB without support
                   for read-write (i.e., in read-only mode) and
                   support monitoring of the home agent
|                  functionality specifically the Home Agent List
                   and the home-agent-registration-related statistics.
|
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]

It should say (see above items for rationale and similarity):

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB without support
                   for read-write (i.e., in read-only mode) and
                   support monitoring of the home agent
|                  functionality, specifically the Home Agent List
                   and the home-agent-registration-related statistics.
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]


(10) punctuation, and extraneous blank line

The DESCRIPTION clause of the mip6HaReadOnlyCompliance3
MODULE-COMPLIANCE, on page 101, says:

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB without support
                   for read-write (i.e., in read-only mode) and
?                  support monitoring and control of the home agent
|                  functionality specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics,
|
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]

It should say (see above items for rationale and similarity):

                  "The compliance statement for SNMP entities
                   that implement the MOBILEIPV6-MIB without support
                   for read-write (i.e., in read-only mode) and
                   support monitoring and control of the home agent
|                  functionality, specifically the Home Agent List
|                  and the home-agent-registration-related statistics.
                   There are a number of INDEX objects [...]

Furthermore, arguably the words "and control" should better be
deleted since write access is not required.

Notes:

The items below are presented in RFC textual order.
I use change bars ('|' in column 1) and occasionally
up/down pointing marker lines ('^^^'/'vvv') to emphasize
the location of textual issues and/or proposed corrections.
Modified text has been re-adjusted to match RFC formatting
rules, where appropriate.

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