[rfc-i] Problems and requirements for RFC Format

[Dave Crocker]

On 4/23/2012 9:26 AM, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
> NEW
> What does in mean to "root out complexity and lack of clarity" for text?
> It means you read it, you think about it, you try to ask questions,
> ideally, you try to implement it. It also means that you send modified
> text so that people can compare the old to the new, view the diff side
> by side, etc. If any of this fails, you complain.

+1.

However I suggest another change:

OLD:
you try to ask questions

NEW:
you ask questions when you are not understanding details or have 
concerns about them.


It's not difficult to ask a question.  I don't think 'try' helps...

d/
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  Dave Crocker
  Brandenburg InternetWorking
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